About "Lies Thicker than Blood"

There's a lot of gaps and holes in this, which will be filled in. Not as funny, it's a shame, but I'm all laughed out. For now....

Anyways I thought I'd develope the story a bit more.

=( Please if it's not that entertaining, tell me I'll wrap it up as soon as I can so we can be on the merry way of ha ha ha again =).

Lots of developments twists, holes definitely holes. Will it be confusing at the end? Yes; will I tell you? No.

Because I will explain everything in the end.

With Lag
~ Ely

Note: Yes I'm moving fast with the development I just hope you can keep up or I'm not too fast.

it moved from slapstick to suspense; logically on the cost of gags, but that no way makes it less enjoyable ... less sledgehammer humor, more subliminal
good, mature writing, a few laughs (im a amember of nefarious!), lots of hints and referrences to the game, lots of plot lines to be brought together in the future, that makes it exciting and amusing
more of that sort, please!

well hopefully I wrote it correctly.

that was excellent, in my opinion, keep up the good work

Good stuff. Keep it coming!